Development of Drafts

These are my ideas from my drafts that I have developed and that have been analysed and reviewed by friends and teachers. It is clear to see the things that I would say I needed to change as they have been annotated to show myself and others the areas that I need to work on. I also got 2 friends and a teacher to review my work and leave comments such as advantages and disadvantages that the felt my work succeeded in but also in what my work fell.
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Hannah Driver:
Advantage: The main photograph clearly shows the target audience and the age of the audience and also represents the genre in which you have looked at.
Disadvantage: The writing of the title and what is inside is not clear enough and does not stand out a huge amount, also the photographs at the bottom have been stretched and look out of place.

Mr Palmer:

Advantage: I think the photography is very well framed and also fits in with the genre and all the subject matters on the page.
Disadvantage: The layout does not follow your typical pop magazine and is very boxed, which would show that it hasn’t been very well researched or laid out.

 

 

 

Hayley Tarling:

Advantage: The layout of this page works really well as you has all the conventions of a magazine consisting of text, quotes and pictures.
Disadvantage: I think that more quotes need to be added and the text needs to be separated from the questions so maybe highlighted in a different colour.